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Araine

  • Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.

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  • Black and White: A Short Story (working title) at storywrite
    With a tiny grey finger I traced the oblong curves of my nose, observing
    shadows as they danced across my skin. Shades upon shades of shifting
  • Chapter 29: GraceDance at storywrite
    I stared into the Celtic half of the marketplace, carefully choosing my
    next destination with the hope of less expensive products. I was clothed
  • Chapter 28: HomeDance at storywrite
    The sweet tinkling of mummer bells peppered the air as the chestnut mare
    made her way through the vast green of the land. Every inch of her was

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  • on The Phantom Horsewoman. by Thomas Hardy, on May 20, 2004
    wow. The imagery is excellent! Your diction was very carefully chosen, and helped to add a great deal to the overall picture that you were trying to put together. The rhyme scheme was also instrumental in keeping the poem flowing, as mild as it is. A very mature and high level read. Thanks for sharing!