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My name is Aurielle aka Auri aka classicgrace aka Arielle. Well lol anyways I have a passion for writing old poery. My poems have been compared to Emily Dickson, Edgar Allen Poe in its style and metaphors. My answers have always been that I very much enjoy their poetry. I like to say my poetry is a mixture. The style of poetry is my own. Its has a graceful flow, a powerful intelliegnt write, with an unique imagery and unique metaphors. My messages may be the same but because of my words the message seems to be taken as unique. I like to use metaphors one that I compare to something not used. I find so many depth in room items such as furniture, a cup table...I also like my setting in a feild, a couch, a couter. Somewhere I have never went.

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  • on On Monsieur's Departure by Queen Elizabeth I , on December 31, 2008
    Since from myself another self I turned.

    This line I can understand because you do not like yourself you turn from someone else
    For I am soft and made of melting snow;
    This line was also very meatphorically challenged
    meliting snow seems like the heart

    I wonder if every mans heart is femine as soft when it comes to love. Afraid of love a song by the bruthas... I wonder

    Her poem was very clear and excellent however I don't like poems that rhymmes are sounds to eassy formed. I love it with ease or else I feel like something is missing but I applause the performance of her feelings brought out.

  • on I'm nobody! Who are you? by Emily Dickinson, on December 31, 2008
    I like her write. I found it very personal and understanding. SHe sounds like she at a long for love because of that she feels like a nobody. I wonder what bog means. People like her brings out the beauty of poetry. Its rather simple in write rather complex in rhyme and very emotional because its personally sincere. It did touch me somewhere maybe because that is how I feel.

  • on Life In A Love by Robert Browning, on October 14, 2007
    This is quite deep. THe title expess all as this line does

    But what if I fail of my purpose here?
    It is but to keep the nerves at strain

    its almost like what's the point of love when
    you wil not endure almost like lifeless

    because their is no love at the end

    then what's the point

    ITs so true. I wish I thout of this.

    What's the point

  • on "your body is my map" by Nizar Qabbani, on September 1, 2007

    This was nice

    Realy nice lines here...

    "like a mad horse from the Caucasus throwing me under its hoofs…
    and gargles with the water of my eyes…
    add to me more fury… add to me
    O’ prettiest fits of my madness"

    I like these lines here

    and an ivory comb in the darkness of your hair...then forget me

    I am a drop of water... ambivalent remaining in the notebook of October...
    your love crushes me... nice creative
    Very creative and beautifully written