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Ava Noire

  • Last seen on Jul 19 9:19 PM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
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  • On Death at allpoetry
    There is no brilliance here in spaces between thoughts
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    I wake entombed in arm’s
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    Darkness engulfed the night like a thick blanket of icy blackness. No stars overhead to light the long highway. Nothing but darkness and the winding road to greet Ally as she d

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  • on Frog Autumn by Sylvia Plath, on July 24, 2005
    Her wording is very revealing.

    She speaks of even flies being a failure, how mornings dissipate. Words such as "wither," and "thin," reveal how fragile life is and how quickly it can fade.

    The gloominess of this poem is penetrating. How remarkable that she could write on such a cliched topic without making it cliche at all.

  • The last line rang of death. "Blank brained as water in the dawn," is just a brilliant life and this piece is brimming with her talent.

  • on Perseus by Sylvia Plath, on July 4, 2005
    I love the detail to the myth of Perseus. She captured many elements of the myths which make this poem exciting and interesting. His quest to bring to bring Polydectes the head of Medusa was a very interesting myth.

  • on Prospect by Sylvia Plath, on July 4, 2005
    Orange, gray, black, absinthe - such lovely detail to color. This is succinct in a powerful way. A beautiful detail.