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    I was standing so close. I could see the pavement, it was only about twenty feet at most. I knew it would be okay, I would land on the snow. They had the 9-1 on the cell phone

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  • ooooh.....I really like this. I like how it is short yet still very satisfying as a poem.
    I creates quite the image in your head when you read it.
    Therefore, I say very well done and just like everyone else, keep writing. Oh, and I agree, the shorest deep (and effective)poem I have ever read.