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Pain
Morphine...takes the edge off the pain. - Thrown, Waves at allpoetry
Thrown from home,
Into a pond of bigger fish. - To the Moon at allpoetry
The pain i suffer is so fucking real, / Gashes in my heart, only time can heal, / I loved you so much, until i found you were fake, / This nightmare wont end, not even when i wake, / I miss my little girl so god damn
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on So You Want To Be A Writer by Charles Bukowski, on August 3, 2006
Heart breakingly true
I have struggled many a time reaching out for the words to come.. and ya know i never did it if it seemed like work. This poem is accurate, true, and great advice in my opinion. I like this author.. very very down to earth and realistic.. touch of humor as well in some of his poems.
vivid and detailed
vivid imagery... i like the part about DAMN! like getting shot in the ass... its not enough to kill ya, only annoy you and piss ya off! i like his work.