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Caliente

  • Last seen on Dec 28 11:42 PM 2007. Member since February 14, 2006.
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  • on I Love Sensual Women by Daniil Ivanovich Kharms, on December 28, 2007
    Ugh. I don't like this one at all. I think it could be edited to where I might like it. But the way that he wrote this is so obscene. It grosses me out. Ugh. [again] Ugh.

  • on The Crunch by Charles Bukowski, on December 28, 2007
    I have no idea why this is in the erotica category.

    there is a loneliness in this world so great
    that you can see it in the slow movement of
    the hands of a clock

    that is the section that got to me. The part about loneliness. I know loneliness. I wish I didn't, but I do.

  • This I love. Her love is silent, as is mine. That much I can understand.

  • on Night on the West River by Po Chu-I, on December 28, 2007
    I like this one too. However, because there were several different images, I had difficulty stringing them together into a cohesive whole.

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