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DeadxxDaisies

  • Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.

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  • Only Fit to Feed at allpoetry
    I failed to see What you're really compiled of inside
  • Chocolate Puddles and Imaginary Fish at storywrite
    On shaky worn out legs, Albert walked down the equally worn out line of sidewalk. It had been many a year since his feet had tread this path before. Whispered voices, faded vis
  • Midnight Concerto at storywrite
    Carmen started awake with a jolt as she quickly bolted upright in the thick shadows of the night. Her glassy, young eyes were visible in the dark confines of her room, beneath

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  • on The Battle Of Hastings by Marriott Edgar, on January 12, 2004
    very nice. There is really nothing to critique lol. It's positively lovely. I especially like your use of the dialect.