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  • Last seen on Sep 11 9:31 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
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  • Shadowspeak at allpoetry
    If my shadow could only talk oh the things it would tell / Of every little piece of heaven, every chunk of hell / You’d know everything hidden, every secret inside / All the pity, the crying, the lack of pride / The t
  • Storm Thursday Afternoon Thoughts at allpoetry
    She sings a song of redemption

    As we all strive for our dream,

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  • on Himself by Alice Guerin Crist, on September 11, 2006

    Simply Beautiful

    The way she versed this poem is simply beautiful. The words often gone unsaid can linger for an eternity. I wish that we could all speak what we feel or express them fully without holding anything back. Alas, we all have regrets about the words that weren't exchanged with our loved ones. Lines 37-40 really break the reader's heart to see that she has such sorrow, you can only help feel that she is wishing for more time with this man she has devoted her life to. I believe she was speaking for us all from the very depths of her human heart.

    Tom

  • on Comrade Jesus by Sarah Norcliffe Cleghorn, on October 7, 2004
    Wow this is definiteley talent.I wish I could half do what she did in this poem with structure meter and flow.And to be about Jesus is even better.She is quite the writer.