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DragonessTawnya

  • Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
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  • The Wolf Witch at storywrite
    She had a job to do, and no matter how painful it was, she would do what must be done.
  • I Can See the Light at allpoetry
    My test, it isn't over. / Feels like it'll never end. / But someday, I'll be rolling in clover, / And I will win back my best friend. / I'll get the garbage out of my life / I'll stabilize my emotions and then
  • Wtf! at allpoetry
    So how am I supposed to feel? / What the fuck am I supposed to do? / I am, once again, thrust into nightmare- / A bloody, hellish, soulless stew. / It happens every time I try / So why do I ever try again? /

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  • I also agree with Andrew. Rollercoaster describes this piece very well. I barely understood it at all. However, I like the sound of it. I will read it again.
    ~Tawnya~

  • How romantic. To wish to immortalize your love. That is a beautiful poem. I think I remember reading it in an English class once. I am not certain. It is familiar. He most certainly made her immortal.
    ~Tawnya~

  • on The Man He Killed by Thomas Hardy, on March 27, 2004
    My impression reading this is that the writer is indifferent, but not, if that makes any sense. Soldiers need to be indifferent, but many times cannot quite cut themselves off from the emotions felt when faced with taking another human life.

  • on Inferno (English) by Dante Alighieri, on March 11, 2004
    Ok, I got through it. I love the story. I'm really getting used to iambic pentameter, I think, being in this class and also the sonnet class. Try as I might, I could not make this line, "And great Achilles I saw, at last whose feet" fit iambic pentameter, though. Maybe I am just tired.
    ~Tawnya~