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A shapely figure runs out from the darkened background / Long copper hair sways across her shoulder as she bends forward with a smile on her face / she beckons me to follow, her long white gown flowing out behind her... - Squish III - A New Beginning at storywrite
I got up slowly and stepped around Bain as I walked briskly down the hall. I expected to hear his faint chuckle from my wet bottom but it didn't come so I breat - Squish II - Ash at storywrite
I turned to see Bain dashing to put everything under the sink and clean himself up before Missy came in. He looked to me in desperation and shooed me to go.
"Go!!"
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on The Splendor Falls by Alfred Lord Tennyson, on May 6, 2004I like your poem it is very interesting, gives a deep meaning of what you think and your feelings on this subject. You have shown effort and great creativity. I prefer your work over many others and think you are a great writer. Keep up the good work! When you reread something you have written, sometimes trying to make it sound differently or another kind of punctuation can help influence the poetic triumph you have just made.
