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we watched the curve of the planet,
dripping sky-lit eyes like beetles - the ------ at allpoetry
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I don't really like the beginning very much. I'm not really sure why, it just doesn't appeal to me. But the second stanza, that's really stunning and beautiful. I think I got a lot of feeling and emotion from that last stanza.
Also, the rhyming was simple and elegant. I enjoyed this piece.