DrowningDay

• Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
• I have 52 poems, 2 stories

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• Red Mistress Pt. 2 at storywrite
  Lillith sat at the four-tiered fountain, staring at the stone walk way at approximately two o’clock in the morning, resting from her training. She was only a mere sixteen years
• Red Mistress (Ch. 1) at storywrite
  It all started when she was little. The death of her best friend started the long line of tragedy’s that was to come to the young girl’s life. The long line of tragedy’s lead t

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• on !blac by e e cummings, on February 21, 2005

  I'm sorry to say that where the punctuation is no joke at all. When I first looked at a Cumming's piece, I could have thought the same. However, Cumming's style is like this. He's the only poet in history to be able to write like this- it's harder than you believe. He uses broken up words to show emotion. You can't look at a Cumming's poem half the time and approach it in an intellectual manner- it's mostly emotion, or to deal with the minds eye. If you try and decode this poem, you ruin it.
  To be honest, if you think about it, I think this is about a storm coming into land. Black against the white sky.
  Black being storm clouds against a sky covered in white clouds.
  Chellie
  xoxo