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  • are you not wanting me yet? at allpoetry
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  • honestly at allpoetry
    Honestly, / I thought I might never love again, / You changed that. / So I listen to the sad songs / And come close to crying / Which is what I do / When I love someone / Honestly. / I love you / I
  • cherry at allpoetry
    there’s a cherry in me

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  • beautiful

    This poem is perfection and simplicity. The last line is stilling ringing in my head. I feel like this poem is like a statue crumbling slowly and growing moss.

  • on Acquainted With The Night by Robert Frost, on December 13, 2004
    I understand Frost's uneasy feeling with himself and with other people. The night is like life, and in the night things seem strange and anything could happen. Night and day are very similar in that way.

    Elle

  • on We Real Cool by Gwendolyn Elizabeth Brooks, on November 18, 2004
    You know, now that I think about it, you're right. When I first read this piece on paper, the two lines were italicized, and I assumed they were the first two lines of the piece rather than the title.

    Thank you for being so attentive and prompt! It's very appreciated.

    Elle

  • on A Crazed Girl by William Butler Yeats, on November 16, 2004
    This is a fantastic piece. "She stood in desperate music wound". I feel like that sometimes. Yeats really taps into a feminine sensibility. "A beautiful lofty thing, or a thing/Heroically lost, heroically found." Nice to see a strong female in a poem rather than a doe-eyed dove with some other qualities named after animals that men hunt for sport.

    Elle