Eldritch

• Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
• I have 97 poems

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  Do what you like in life because its way too short. The ball is in your hands, the whole world is your court.

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• on The jewel of stars. by Subramania Bharati, on June 3, 2003

  i like the word atomic...but this is a bit to earthy for me. one of the best poems i've read in a while but...just not my type of poem hehe i get bored with it too easily. says a lot in so little words though and the words were chosen very well and they suit the poem.
• on When I Suspected by Spike Milligan, on June 3, 2003

  This was really nice... I liked the creativity used on the look of it, too. The spacing before
  
  'Pendulummed with sadness.' (which by the way is my fav line)
  
  and
  
  'I could hear the clock ticking.'
  
  Really made those two lines stand out. I love how he kept the time thing going...'time'..'minute'..'pendulummed'..'clock ticking' thats really nice, i enjoyed this piece