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Casual clots, wrinkles in the mountains.
I'm folding togs into shapes that stack well. - Trepidation at allpoetry
These regnant men have walked down from the throne.
To the edge of totality, to fall into the dregs. - Time by Jacob Cofield (My beloved brother.) at allpoetry
Time The dead gold fish down the drain.
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on Bora Ring by Judith Wright, on February 16, 2005This poem had simplicity which seemed a little choppy by left it more vivid and mysterious than any other poem that was filled with massive descriptive words! I really enjoyed this poem, it was thought provoking and had nice motions in it. The background was interesting as well!
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the last stanza's, in my opinion, stood out, but it looks like Poetryality had said everything/
-nicci