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  • on Moonlight by Victoria Sackville-West, on May 23, 2004
    This is almost seductive, magical, and, in a way, erotic if read a certain way. Or maybe I'm getting lonely. I have to say that the following lines are my favorites:
    "When colour's absence gives escape
    To the deeper spirit of the shape"
    They reflect a certain spirituality and depth to the author I can admire.

  • This is sad, lonely, and dramatic. A goat amongst sheep.

  • Truly love how this one is pieced together. I'll admit, although I'm doing this for a contest, there are some great poems here, and I wish I'd have found them earlier!

  • Very nice! One always like to know that someone will fight to get a crown for them! There were no specific lines that especially caught my attention, but the entire piece fits together perfectly!