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I loath the heavy breath of lust so hot
Exhaled upon my neck. It makes me sick - The Posession at allpoetry
The proper words elude me. It was lust
But more than lust - a nightmare and a dream.
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on O Death Rock Me Asleep by Anne Boleyn, on September 13, 2008Though we read the words of the dead so often... I particularly feel as if a ghost is talking when I read this because of her so historical and wrong execution. It is like peering into the past.
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I think the use of imagery here does convey a strong feeling, but it's also very ugly. I don't care at all for this style, though I suppose it gets its point across. However, after reading it, I only feel unfulfilled and wonder... what was the point?
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on Bilbo's Last Song (At the Grey Havens) by J R R Tolkien, on February 23, 2008Tolkien capitalized the word "I" I can assure you. This would disgust him!
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on XXX: Shake Hands, We shall Never be Friends by A E Housman, on December 17, 2007Bittersweet.
This reminds me of something I told a person once.
