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on The Age Demanded by Ernest Hemingway, on May 24
Well I don't know !
The writing is fine and the rhyming is perfect. I never know of Ernest Hemingway for poetry writing. I know his writings is fine. I will have to read some more of his poetry. Aot of bitterness in this poem but I hope to learn and I will have to read all kinds of poetry. -
on The Three Little Pigs by Roald Dahl, on November 2, 2008
cute
very entertaining and very well written.
Thank you for letting me read this poem and I want to see more of your work.
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Sadly Roald Dahl is no longer with us but he has left behind an awful lot of prose and poetry, some of which can be found on this site. -
on "Butter And Eggs" by Margaret Deland, on February 5, 2008
Very good
Direct and to the point and I love teh rhyme in this and hopefully I will read some more poetry to learn from these poets. Well written and really want to read some more poetry.
Very good
I think that this poem is very creative in this matter and I would read it again and again. I think things have changed over the election of Barack Obama. But there is people whom think the old ways of live. There will always be that way. It is a start of things.