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on Sonnet XVII: I do not love you as if you were brine-rose, topaz by Pablo Neruda, on September 20, 2004A VERY profound piece here. Some of the classics ARE classics because they are timeless as well as simply incredible. A nice piece to promote. It has bween a long while since I have read this piece.
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on Any Soldier To His Son by George Willis, on August 23, 2003Quite an amazing piece. Not too thrilled about the "n word" in line eleven but if you felt it necessary, who am I to judge? Yes, the glamourized ones...those who didnt make it back, those who were "heroes" and DID make it back, perhaps we think about them too much and forget about the men who went and DIDN'T get any glory. Certainly not fair, like being in the outfield and no one knows you're in the game.
All in all a very thought provoking piece that gives the rest of us who have not had to endure the hell of war a tiny little slice of what it was really like. I for one am certainly grateful for all the men who have served this country over and over again when the call came. God bless every one of them AND their families for the HUGE sacrifice they made for us!
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on Do You Think That I Do Not Know? by Henry Lawson, on June 10, 2003
awesome!
Incredible of course. What do you expect from someone who had such a bad life and experienced so much pain and disillusionment? I have no idea why but I always write my best after I have been totally destroyed by a relationship gone bad. If Henry's bio is any example, he had enough pain to outwrite us all! :-)
