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Karmageddon

  • Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.

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  • 4th of july at storywrite
    This was written on the fith of july, because we stayed up too late on the fourth.
    I am currently looking down at my shirt, which has a hole burned into it above the navel.
  • Death of Phi at storywrite
    The Death of Phi
    Ben Camenker

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  • on Sailor Town by Cicely Fox Smith, on August 19, 2005
    This was superb.
    purely awesome.
    If I was asked to give my most critical review, it would be "Not everyone in the world is smart and therefore, this poem will not appeal to everyone."
    You WOULD have to be an idiot not to like this.
    The imagery was *perfect* the rhyming spot-on (none of that horrible forced rhyme that leaves a sour taste in my mouth as it scrapes off the tongue).
    it managed to take lines that, syllable by syllable actually DIDNT have the appropriate rhythym, and use them in ways to breathe life into them and instill a new type of rythm, reminiscent of old sailor songs and the sway of the boat on white-tipped swells.
    This is one of my favorite poems on the site.

    Edited on Aug 19, 9:05 p.m. because 'IMALOSER'.