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- an endless cremation at allpoetry
the fire stood higher and higher / atop its pile of paper tigers / as moon inhaled and coughed / the stars, predictable without a doubt / took the place of those smoked out / - / - the leper and orthodontist at allpoetry
a naked leper / strutted across the lawn / giving a side glance / and wave / to the orthodontist across street / who recently installed / brand new shutters / this particular surgeon of the mouth - attending funerals on uncultivated land at allpoetry
the grass marched / the way of the wind / towards the edge of the forest / where tall spruce / fall / die / and make the ground / as rich as cemetery soil /
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on The Crunch by Charles Bukowski, on June 30, 2005Just brilliant, Bukowski at his best.
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on The Kiss by Julia Caroline (Ripley) Dorr, on June 2, 2005The first line was almost startling, not a traditonal way for starting a love poem but it evolves as you make your way through it. I loved how it ended, almost signifying she expects to see him in Heaven, thus "Your last living kiss" will not actually be the last.
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on Freedom by Charles Bukowski, on May 30, 2005I think you have to look past the balls being cut off. I think its a symbol of how sex controls us, he had interest because she had something he wanted. With that gone, he just wanted more wine.
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on 16-bit Intel 8088 chip by Charles Bukowski, on May 29, 2005I've only started looking into the works of Bukowski and never thought he'd be a man of electronics. Guess if nothing else, i've learned how to put my foot in my mouth.
