Leslie

• Last seen on Nov 10 11:27 PM 2008. Member since February 14, 2006.
• I have 40 poems

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• here at allpoetry
  and we'll sleep here
  where rain has quench the thirst.
• sea gulls at allpoetry
  The sound of the sea gulls my love, The always sluggish and elevated sea gulls
• sex at allpoetry
  there is nothing but a body to devour,

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• on Amaze by Adelaide Crapsey, on July 22, 2005

  Well first of all, I believe the hands can be such a distinctive and beautiful part in a person, so this write already captures my attention and what I also like very much from this write is the simplicity yet the cleverness of the word usage, most of them are monosylables, and the words how they fall as if a monologue is taking place, you can almost hear her voice and how she describes the awkward sensation when you look at yourself, you are feeling like a stranger inside your own skin, as if for a moment, very ethereal like, one does not recognize what you are seeing, one does not give credit to 'being' such?..'existing' as such?...yet the hands still show her some traces that she believes existed in another woman, maybe from her past. A great amount of talent and craft are shown in this cinquain, and I think that the fact she is using more words but with only one syllable, enable her poem to be very well constructed, without sounding redundant, but still allowing her to use a description that completely paints an image of all the atmosphere, her feeling of awkwardness, stranged or nostalgia.
  
  Leslie
• on The Question by Pablo Neruda, on December 20, 2004

  A beautiful piece about love yet mixed with command, however doesn’t rest any good from it, since it has the magical touch of his brightness, “Do not fear, I am yours,”
• on Song Of Despair by Pablo Neruda, on December 20, 2004

  For the first time in my life I’m speechless I have run out of things to say about him he is just one of the Great Ones that the words aren’t enough to describe how talented he was.
• on Love by Pablo Neruda, on December 20, 2004

  Wow I simply adore this poet; he had the magical touch of putting down emotions in such a beautiful way, this feeling is so sad but yet so true it so painful when the one you love losses all magic for you and you can see it in his eyes how they doesn’t shine like they use to and not to see yourself reflected on them.