Lithium-sunshine

• Last seen on Apr 29 1:55 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
• I have 33 poems

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• [ he's got a lifeless heart that started beating the day I loved you, and meant it. ] at allpoetry
  he's got a lifeless heart that started beating the day I loved you, and meant it.
  I knew the pulse, we just couldnt get the blood to flow and I remember-
• Dandelions and whispered goodbyes at allpoetry
  I sat there and watched the smoke leave your lungs. Theres something in your breath- caught, suspended in the smoke that once filled you.
  Inhale, exhale.
• chem class at allpoetry
  they are morons. I took what each said, and i thought it sounded poetic in a moronic sort of way.

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• on The Man He Killed by Thomas Hardy, on December 13, 2005

  This poem was worded a little strangly....I felt that the 3rd stanza was a bit redundant, but then again...thats just me. Its funny how war is- I mean, this poem is true. If met in any other place than the frontlines....you and your enemy would probably be friends. It's kind of like this....America is told that Iraq is our enemy. But I, personally, dont find any one of the people in Iraq (except for the few terrorists that happen to live there) my enemies. Quite frankly, I would love to take all of them out for drinks, and tell them how sorry I am.
  You kill because you are told who your enemy is in war...and forget that they are people just like you.