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  • Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.

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  • Wake Up Wake Up at allpoetry
    Wake up it's a new day / Wake up it's too late / You already opened up your eyes / And now there's no surprise / Everyday is a good day / Only when you're there beside me / You're nothing like the asshole he was
  • 5.4.3.2.1 at allpoetry
    Carve me out of your piece of plywood / Never so good an oak or maple / Carve me out of your pounding heart / Let the flesh lay there in waste / As I self destruct again..... / 5 / 4 / 3 / 2 / 1.....I can't
  • In Her Eyes at allpoetry
    In her eyes I see the glory / That might have been / The woman I thought knew it all / Turned out doesn't know a thing / Not a single thing about saving / This soul of mine from the damnation / Of the world of the

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  • on Dirge by William Shakespeare, on February 21, 2004
    As much as I love Shakespear....I find that he does quite a bit of repeating in this one....I'm not likeing it too much. Usually I love a good dirge now and again, especially the kind played on old organs, but for some reason this one isn't doing anything for me but think that he's being rude to not let those who loved him morn his death and visit his grave or bring him flowers to honor him. but of course he could have had many other reasons for that, reasons we may never know....well...i'm done here.
    -midget-

  • on To The Unknown God by Antero Tarquinio de Quental, on February 4, 2004
    wow. i liked this. this is very good. and if i'm not mistaken in the bible it says something about the unknown god being Jesus...one of the apostles told the people about it when he say the alter there. this is very good and don't worry, if you were praying to the unknown god as the god i know then you'll see him in heaven.
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  • on Wood Magic by John Buchan, on February 4, 2004
    very well writen, very good. i liked it, but as usual i didn't understand. i haven't been understanding alot of the meanings of alot of these poems on oldpoetry.com but i still have found it amusing to look and read and wonder aimlessly about the poems and read them as i go along.
    -midget-

  • on New Moon by Marina Ivanova Tsvetaeva, on February 4, 2004
    not sure i understood this one either, but i am at a loss for words at it's beauty. very well written i must say. i did like it very much though.
    great write
    -midget-