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  • wow, this is amazing...I love all the descriptiveness used in this...it actually kept my attention through the whole thing
    Just gotta pick out one of my fave lines It just stood out to me
    "The sea-blooms and the oozy woods which wear
    The sapless foliage of the ocean"
    I just love how that sounds! such a picture it paints...k...I better get to finishing the rest of the homework

    ~~T~~

  • on Paradiso (Italian) by Dante Alighieri, on March 4, 2004
    Jhirrad (homework)
    This makes me wish I could speak Italian Such a lovely sounding language....k...of course I didn't read this whole thing...I don't even know how to pronounce the words right But I did read some to get a feel of the sound like you asked.

    ~~T~~

  • on Inferno (English) by Dante Alighieri, on March 4, 2004
    Jhirrad~
    k, I'm commenting on this (for the assignment ) I have to admit that I didn't read the whole thing...I have no patience...I think I have adhd or something...seriouslY! but I got a good feel of this poem...first time I've ever read Dante...so it was quite interesting....the rhyming pattern is different than what was in your contest so that caught me...I'll have to come back another time and read more of this.

    ~~T~~