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valiant was an investigator with a taste for the drink hired to catch her playing paddy cake - i am ghost at allpoetry
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on First Love by Shimazaki Toson, on December 16, 2003aww what adorably sweet imagry here i like this poem the sweetness of it is fresh and i want another taste....
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on Dead Love by Algernon Charles Swinburne, on December 16, 2003aww such a touching piece... "'the lady in black awaits her love...' what darling poetry touched tears upon cold eyes...
a little write about the touching emotoion that doesnt always happen by.. yet rides away like a thief in the night... should thee vanish before my eyes ... will you lay kiss upon your cold cheek next time... "
I love this poem you have wrote as I have included my own that seemed to fit just fine.. I hope to read more of you later in time... *props*
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on Hate by James Stephens, on December 16, 2003Wow very touching piece indeed... so indepth.. So hard to touch the subject of war and the emotions mixed up with it.. Its the nervous giddiness on the night before christmas wondering of your presents.. its the shivering bumps on your arms next to your worst fear... the want of releasing your hate with that of your own anger and revenge that you seek through it... then again you can turn it into the confusion of why you hate the enemy so in the first place when with no reason are you brought to war? to hate someone you do not even know to shed blood the same that flows in both your bodies for a short moment in a speck of life that must hate and be brought to hate when no one would remember.... are you a victim of your enemy.. shall you be set free.. is a wondering question indeed.. why cant we do what we can to aviod such calamidy...
