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Mackintoch

  • Last seen on May 19 5:02 PM 2007. Member since February 14, 2006.

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  • Incomplete at allpoetry
    I may not say I love you in a thousand of words,
    or say anything different that you haven't heard,
  • Without you at allpoetry
    Drowning through depressions; I choke upon emotions.
    I never thought I'd be out of rythyms,
  • You complete me at allpoetry
    As the morning awakes
    and filters through my senses

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  • on Unending Love by Rabindranath Tagore, on September 11, 2004
    This is wonderful. I like this piece so very much. I wish that I was the one written it. anyway, I think you honestly did a magnificent job. Thank you for sharing it and it sure was a pleasure and a privellege to read it. You have a wonderful one and God bless you

  • on The spring breeze by U Tak, on July 31, 2004
    I think this piece is alright> I it indeed too short but it sounds okay. Thank you for sharing and may you have a bless day

  • on On the Building of Springfield by Vachel Lindsay, on July 14, 2004
    This is just a fantastic piece of work. I think this is just gorgeous. I like it a lot. Keep up the wonderful job. You have a bless day and again, I thank you very much for sharing. It was a pleasure to read

  • on Tanka 03 by Masaoka Shiki, on June 14, 2004
    This is a wonderful write. I think it makes perfect sense. I like it a lot. Just remember we only see what we want to see. Let me clarify that a little bit. A young girl over the age of 15 stands in front of the mirror to only see herself fat and not beautiful. She often questions herself on how she looks. But she fails to understand that appearance is not everything. She fails to understand that beauty is deep within the skin. It is far most reside in the heart. I don't know if you probably capture what I am saying here. Sometimes it is best to not judge ourselves. I think it is best to let other judge us; although, they will misjudge us most of the time, we just have to know our values. We have to understand how much we worth. Don't be fool by a picture. Try to see what that picture really means. It is a pleasure reading this piece. I am not going to lie to you, I truly like it. Anyway, Keep up the good work and may your day be blessed. By the way, before I live, I just want you to know that the man you see facing the mirror is the creation of God himself. Remember that God created us in his own self image....