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to those eyebrows spread out over places that I want to go - Keeping an Easy Flow at allpoetry
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on To the fields in springtime by Yamabe no Akahito, on July 9, 2005This is what I thought poetry was supposed to be. I would suggest that the fourth line be taken out because it is not needed. Great poem.
Edited on Jul 09, 6:09 p.m. because 'ok'.

"One pair of arms is like another..." The fact that she uses the term, "lads" may indicate that she has not experienced extensive sexual maturity and must reach beyond memory.