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  • Refuge at allpoetry
    Steam rises
    infused with the essence
  • exhale at allpoetry
    God, I look for you and find nothing.
    Desolation surrounds me.
  • Release at allpoetry
    Pissed off and raging at the moon.
    Doen't make difference, just helps

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  • This poem is so vivid, it is scary. Reading about the gas attack - nothing is left to the imagination. The utter exhaustion of the soldiers in the first lines is unimaginable. The horrors of war are not glossed over in this poem at all.

  • on Beach Burial by Kenneth Slessor, on March 18, 2006

    Awesome Poem

    Depressing to read, but he brought the scene to life so vividly - I could close my eyes and hear the waves on the beach, see the bodies rolling in the surf. Knowing a bit of the history of WWII it makes the poem very hard to read. Sad, the lost of life - I won't say pointless, but so unnecessary.

  • on Amaze by Adelaide Crapsey, on July 16, 2005
    Wow...so much said in so few words. I picture a woman sitting looking at her hands, work worn. Her hands were not the hands she remembered...soft and sleek, well manicured. She now looks and sees hands that have grown old - reminding her of her mother's hands....'a woman like me once had hands like these'.

  • on The Rum Parade by A B 'Banjo' Paterson, on April 8, 2004
    Interesting piece. Never heard of a rum parade before. When you think of the history of that time - the Spanish Flu, the war, this poem really gives an insight into what people were thinking...at least that is my opinion.