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- I saw you for the first time tonight at allpoetry
I saw you for the first time tonight standing there in your dress and veil of white - Deep within my veins at allpoetry
My love for you runs deep within my veins no other could feel for you the same - Farewell And Goodbye at allpoetry
The love I once had for you is gone / and sadness has taken it's place / all the plans we had made have been withdrawn / because you are a big disgrace / you lied and cheated and called me names / when all I wanted
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on Ode to the West Wind by Percy Bysshe Shelley, on March 5, 2004I read this poem for our assignment and I really must say that this was awesome. It gave me the chills just reading it. I can't wait to read the next one. I just hope that i can learn to write like this because it is beautiful. Maryann22
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on Paradiso (Italian) by Dante Alighieri, on March 5, 2004I did read some of this like you asked us to for the assignment but I couldn't understand that much of it. But what i could make out, it is a very beautiful language. Maryann22
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on Inferno (English) by Dante Alighieri, on March 5, 2004I have read this for the assignment. As much as I read of it, it was really good. The rhyme was different but it was great I hope to come back and read more. Maryann22
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on The Right Thing by Theodore Roethke, on March 4, 2004I have read this lovely poem and I would have to say that i think that this goes with number 2 It keeps 90% of the traditional form but just modifies some of the words. Line one goes like this, Let others probe the mystery if they can, -and- line six which should read the same, goes like this, Let others delve that mystery if they can. It should have stayed the same. Maryann22
Edited on Mar 04, 9:40 p.m. because ''.
