- Last seen on Apr 24 12:18 PM 2007. Member since November 19, 2006.
- I am a 14 year old person
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Set in stone:
a secret I cannot speak of, - gaps at allpoetry
There are gaps in the road where the grass verge withers,
and gaps in the teeth where the red gums shiver; - still born at allpoetry
Born. Clean from the womb.
I held it, wrapped it;
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on So Fair is She by Spike Milligan, on November 19, 2006Hahaha so funny! It made me laugh aloud, it's the rhyme that does it for me, and the twist in it too. People can empathise with this feeling which makes it all funnier!
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on Philip Le Barr by Spike Milligan, on November 19, 2006Haha amusing! I like the ending and the way it rhymes, of course.
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on My Sister Laura by Spike Milligan, on November 19, 2006Awwawwaww, this is so so cute! Spike had a kid called Laura. It's so sweet and childishly logical.
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on Me by Spike Milligan, on November 19, 2006I don't understand the last line. There doesn't seem to be anything in between, he's either happy or sad, no other emotion. He's hating himself, it's sad.
