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Misty Melody

  • Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.

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  • The Picture at allpoetry
    I stumbled upon a picture And what a story it told
  • His Love Written In Red at allpoetry
    The road that He had chosen Lead to the old rugged cross
  • The Promise at allpoetry
    In the cold bleak dark of night The wisemen saw a wonderous sight

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  • on The Best is Good Enough by James Whitcomb Riley, on March 5, 2004
    In this poem I think it the enjambment makes it flow smoother, and have some anticipation of what the next line will bring. This poem does pull you in and make you feel as though you are there. Melody

  • on The Right Thing by Theodore Roethke, on March 3, 2004
    I have to agree with MasochistBunny this is not true to the Villanelle. To the untrained eye it may appear to be because it is close. Also on line 18 is not proper nor is it fitting with the pentameter. It has 11 syllables instead of 10 unless I am not reading it correct. I'll have to go back to the board on punctuation to see if I am correct. But I think mystery has 3 syllables in it. mys-te-ry???? Also line 1 & 3 are suppose to repeat altenating in the 3rd line of each stanza and that does not happen.
    Edited on Mar 05, 6:10 p.m. because ''.