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There once was a young girl who lived with her father in a beautiful castle. Her mother, the queen, had died when she was just born, and her father couldn't bare to take - A Tribute to My Father, Martin Edward Webb (April 27, 1943 to April 9, 2001) at storywrite
Not every girl is privileged to have a father who treats her like a princess. Not every girl gets unconditional love from her dad.
My parents divorced when I was three years
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on Bear In There by Sheldon Allan Silverstein, on November 28, 2005This is so cute!
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on A Boy Named Sue by Sheldon Allan Silverstein, on November 28, 2005I, too, didn't realize that Silverstein wrote this. I just knew it as a song. The things we learn on AP!
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on Amaze by Adelaide Crapsey, on July 17, 2005I agree with you, Martach. I had to read through this piece a few times to figure out what she was saying. She doesn't know her hands anymore; yet, they still hold value as someone else (most likely her mother) had these same hands after living the same number of years). I think my confusion in reading this piece is the lack of punctuation throughout. I want to put in commas and semicolons to make this more readable, but I'm not the author, so all I can do is read.
This poem reminds me of the movie beaches when the woman is searching through pictures trying to find pictures of her mother's hands.
