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on At Dusk by Taigu Ryokan, on August 4, 2009
At Dusk
a gentle piece of poetry with descriptions that pull you into the poem.I like the use of the lowercase for me that helps the poem flow

To my tgeacher
I felt this poem to be timeless , generation after generationpeople can enjoy his words and what a poignant tale this poem tells.
What a gentle compassionate poet, we discover as we read of his distress about the death of his beloved teacher and his frustration as he decided how to honour his spirit.Truly a poem to read and read again