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  • on To My Teacher by Taigu Ryokan, on August 4

    To my tgeacher

    I felt this poem to be timeless , generation after generation
    people can enjoy his words and what a poignant tale this poem tells.
    What a gentle compassionate poet, we discover as we read of his distress about the death of his beloved teacher and his frustration as he decided how to honour his spirit.Truly a poem to read and read again

  • on At Dusk by Taigu Ryokan, on August 4

    At Dusk

    a gentle piece of poetry with descriptions that pull you into the poem.I like the use of the lowercase for me that helps the poem flow