Ryan dk

• Last seen on Feb 21 11:38 PM 2006. Member since February 21, 2006.

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• on Fog by John Bannister Tabb, on February 21, 2006

  i read this twice. it has a great flow to it, sounds like a short quip of song. i like the correlation of the title and the first verse they go well together. but after reading this twice i realize i just do not like the last line.
  
  it does absolutely nothing for me. i think it's more of the word "mysteries" it sounds a tad forced to me. i don't know, it's most likely just the way i read it. wrong i am sure.