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on Freedom by Charles Bukowski, on October 14, 2005
Seems to me as if it was his act of vengeance.....making her mental de-masculation of him an actual physical de-masculation. Disturbing. And raw.
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on Rosalie's Good Eats Cafe by Sheldon Allan Silverstein, on October 14, 2005
Well.....my goodness! Now THAT is descriptive poetry! A perfect rhyme scheme, not missing a single beat. I feel as if I were there, watching these people. Makes me wanna stay up late, eat out, watch, listen, and learn. Interesting idea.
A damn impressive observational write.....damn impressive.
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on My Little Lovelies by Arthur Rimbaud, on October 14, 2005Doesn't do anything for me. I don't know what good one can take away.....I find nothing of beauty or anything redeemable within these words. Don't believe I've ever described something as putrid poetry before.....but that certainly seems to fit this.
Just awful.
~ Sincerely, Janet ~
Sigh. I don't know what to say. The plight of soldiers in war and their Loved ones waiting and desperately hoping for the best and agonizing with the deep-seeded fear of the worst.....always gets to me. To the deepest parts of me, honestly. I just don't know what to say.
It's an extraordinarily well worded piece of poetry. Beauty out of destruction.....
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