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Many times I find myself asking-
Why won't you just let go,
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on The jewel of stars. by Subramania Bharati, on May 27, 2003This was very good.
I liked the wording alot, and
how free it was. It went from
one subject to the next and back
again. Almost like it whisked you
away with it. Very creative.
Come bye and check out my work sometime
I would love to see what you think! ~Jess

Great subject to write on.
I deffinately agree with cristos about
it flowing. It fit perfectly.
Ths gets high stars from me.
Wonderful work.