- Last seen on Mar 6 6:08 PM. Member since February 22.
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on St Ives by Roald Dahl, on March 6I heard of this one before, the one from the author's notes.. I really do like the shorter version of this though..
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on Hot And Cold by Roald Dahl, on March 6this sounds a bit like the change of life that women go through.. course that could just be me.. but that's how it sounds.. especially in the last two lines. Love the rhyme
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on Cinderella by Roald Dahl, on March 6wow I kind of like this version a lot better. I'm not one for believing in fairy tales. this one was much better.. this poem held my concentration, and as of late that's a very hard thing to accomplish. the rhyme is outstanding, the flow was smooth. I really enjoyed reading this
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