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TrulyLoothy

  • Last seen on Jul 9 11:30 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
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  • Disaster at allpoetry
    Something's hiding in the shadows
    creeping up behind the one remaining
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    My mask is surreal because it hides pain so real
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    Where it all consists of a ploy

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  • it was interesting

    This is pretty cool, at first I didn't like how he said fuck..and it was definitly a shock factor. But then I thought again, and that I find respectable, because atleast he had the balls to say what he wanted to say.

  • on When I Love by Nizar Qabbani, on July 9, 2006

    holy crap

    I actually hated this...I don't know why...but it seems so simple and cliche to me. I did not feel any effort or depth at all. It seems as though there was no thought process and I didn't really know where the author was going with it.

  • on Autumn Love by Li Ching Chao, on October 2, 2005
    wow it was really awesome...i was able to sing along with it in my head...it was so very poetic