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Lonely, I cry (Revisited) at allpoetry
Crimson rivers that never run dry,
Falling away from these lonely and tear stricken eyes.
Crazy at allpoetry
Crazy with the unknown,
Crazy in every way,
Only you at allpoetry
The love is my eyes for you must be one lost to the sight of you.
For I cant see anyone else but you.

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on Drink the Nectar by Mirabai, on August 5, 2003

Great
Drink the nectar does that have relevence to the Bible? or something else? Whats your insperation for this peom. It has some sub contexts i dont understand, but never the less it is beautiful. It paints an image of a person standing beneath a flower and drink from its nectar, and gain new life and new thoughts. I think you did a very good job with this peom both in content, context, and writing style and i thank you for writing it so that i was able to read it.
on Eunomia by Solon, on August 5, 2003

Nice
Your poem is cool, and its word use is very enlightened.
on Pain--has an Element of Blank-- by Emily Dickinson, on August 5, 2003

Great
Ohh speak the truth. Pain knows no beginning to it and no end, just periods in which we can messure it. You poem is true to that, it is short but well writen, your use of enlightened makes me smile, it is a word not commonly used often anymore. You reference of infinite contain brings math into play which makes the image of what you right worth 10,000 words. Thank you for writing this.
on In A Year by Robert Browning, on August 5, 2003

Wow
Wow