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Date: 10/19/01 - Poetry Journal: Entry #8: Annielisciou
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I wrote this poem during a presentation of some video about an absurdly long narrative poem because my close friend Annieliscious asked me to write a poem about her. Not
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on “Hope” is the thing with feathers— by Emily Dickinson, on September 17, 2003Classic Dickinson.The harmonious semi-rhymes that categorize Emily's writings are here in full force,making the poem not just a mental playground but a soothing lullaby.One verse sticks out in my mind,its helpless generousity permeating the outer coating of close-minded criticism:"It asked a crumb—of Me."
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on Ariel by Sylvia Plath, on September 17, 2003More inenbriating goodness from everyone's favorite toxic genius.I am always amazed at Plath's pathogenic stanzas,plateauing and stalling on the edge between meaningless,cryptic wordplay and divine,pensive masterwork.This poem is a great example,shifting from something to substance with every other line,keeping you on the edge of you seat in anticipation of the cathartic climax that will never come.My favorite line:"Eye, the cauldron of morning."
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on An Appearance by Sylvia Plath, on September 14, 2003Another shot of poetic lavender to remind my why Plath is one of my all-time favorites.I cannot express how subtley fierce this [poem was,like a great,shaking dragon or a giggling tiger.
"From her lips ampersands and percent signs
Exit like kisses."
Emm...wondrous imagery.

"Shyly the silver-hatted mushrooms make
Soft entrance through,
And undelivered lovers, half awake,
Hear noises in the dew "