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  • on The Cremation of Sam McGee by Robert W Service, on June 10, 2004
    Amazing poem, especially since Service had it all in his head before he actually wrote the poem and the internal rhyme, I absolutely love this poem. The first stanza quite addicting after you memorize it!! "Was that night on the marge of Lake Lebarge, I cremated Sam McGee."

  • on A Woman at Her Husband's Grave by Joseph Seamon Cotter Sr, on April 30, 2004
    Ahh, expressing meanings in more than just words. It seems as though the rhythem gives it a mocking, bouncing-back feeling. That's the best that I can describe it. The rhyme also helps add to the feeling.

  • on He is more than a hero by Sappho, on April 30, 2004
    Oh, I really liked the description of feeling in this piece.
    "a thin flame runs under
    my skin; seeing nothing" The word that really helps that description is "thin."
    There was one little thing I caught "you suddenly, I can'" was can' suppose to be like that or was that a typo?

  • on Craven-Heart by Ada Cambridge, on April 30, 2004
    I though this piece was okay but I don't like the beat of the three line stanzas. It just seems there are syllables missing whenever you have three line stanza. Besides that I liked the message this poem had and was worded nicely too.