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Cocolocoblondie

  • Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
  • I have 198 poems

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    The week went from
    Wednesday to Wednesday this week.
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    I inhale as three lines of white
    cotton clouds ease into view
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    I am temptation:
    10 letters of bitter zest

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  • Oh, what a delightful read. I am surprised no one else has commented, this is such societal angst (the kind of poems which many on here love to applaud). Well, carry on. lol

  • I am not a fan of cummings, and haven't been since the first, but I truly enjoyed this poem. I found that, when read line by line for understanding, the reader is left confused, but, if read all at once, the mind de-garbles and a message is heard.

  • This is very interesting to say the least. A sweet poem, and the syntax brings much to the poem. Without it, the poem would take different meaning, and the reader would be left disquieted.