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- Lonely Tomorrow at allpoetry
A lonely night crying out in rain
Trickling thoughts consuming my brain - An Hour of a Crazed Mind at allpoetry
Detached silence, a preservation to survive, develop a new consciouslness for within the peoples eyes - A Trickling Memory at allpoetry
Blood stained water trickling down my cheek
Leaving my consciousness destroyed and weak
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on Song Of The Flower XXIII by Khalil Gibran, on July 31, 2003
i found your poem to be really great
i think the poem was written really well with metaphors that only
a good poet could create
i enjoyed the journey under which you made the glower go through and i related to the poem as a journey life
to me the poem showed me that you live through each day and rach season with different feelings that are depicted from the weather
and the mood that each season creates
i hope to read some more of your poetry as i found it quite appetising

good
quite a good poem though it seemed to go on just a little bit with out gathering into new detailalthough the meaning behind the poem was good