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- The Pattern of Pain at allpoetry
Stealing my sanity and crushing my soul
The time bomb inside never gets old
- A Breath at allpoetry
Moonlight shining down on my withering unconscious corpse
Days of solitude in the depths of the darkest dungeons of my heart - Simmering In The Dark at allpoetry
You have left a burning candle to simmer to its death
Leaving my soul to finally rest
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on Song Of The Flower XXIII by Khalil Gibran, on July 31, 2003
i found your poem to be really great
i think the poem was written really well with metaphors that only
a good poet could create
i enjoyed the journey under which you made the glower go through and i related to the poem as a journey life
to me the poem showed me that you live through each day and rach season with different feelings that are depicted from the weather
and the mood that each season creates
i hope to read some more of your poetry as i found it quite appetising

good
quite a good poem though it seemed to go on just a little bit with out gathering into new detailalthough the meaning behind the poem was good