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Flrt421f

  • Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
  • I have 161 poems, 3 stories

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  • Estimated love at storywrite
    "I thought I told you a million times that you're the only one for me, you're the only one I love and will always be there for, Alena you know that, why can't you just accept i
  • Spearful Dignity at storywrite
    Spearful Dignity
    Some mythology stories tell of reason things were created or made, but others tell of great heroes. Many heroes influenced mythology making it funner and mo
  • Cut to Regrets at storywrite
    I looked up, keeping his glare. Tears streamed down my cheeks as he held my arm, I glanced down, my lip trembling. He threw down my arm and stomped off.
    Turning back he yell

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  • on Unending Love by Rabindranath Tagore, on June 24, 2004
    woah I think this is a good poem i like it alot its awsome it really expersses how you love somebody. Its crazy that somebody can love sombody that much and yet you were able to decscribe it in a way that made perfect sence. Um i never really read a porm in oldpoetry that i understood but i really understand this one and like it so great job!
    best of luck,
    -amanda-
    a comment from my friend:
    I love,love,love this poem it made so much sense. It is wonderful to hear that there is some one out there who has experienced love this way you have made it seem as if we don't have to think that a love this strong can only happen in fairy tales you made it where we out in this world can look forward to having what you have. What more can I say you did a great job and i hope who ever you wrote this about you and that person continue to have the relationship you have in this poem.
    Best of luck!
    -Kayla-

  • on Three Dark Maids by Anonymous European, on June 24, 2004
    Very good poem but I didn't understand the part were you say "Near Jaen,- Axa, Fatima, Marien". Other wise I understood what you were saying and I loved it. Good job!
    -Kayla-

  • on The Broken Drum by Edgar Albert Guest, on June 3, 2004
    lol this is REALLY CUTE. i like this alot its all sad because he broke his drum hehe anyways this is adorable but alls ad but nice job i could actually fallow it and undertsand it but it was still oldpoetry so great job. i like this catagory alot. anyways nice job!
    -amanda-

  • this is cool, i like this alot especially because its a weird way to think of death and everything i like it its darka nd interesting to read. great poem i loved it!
    -amanda-