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  • on 8 Count by Charles Bukowski, on May 18, 2004
    damned writers block and damn deadlines--this is amazing!!! so biting and honest and beautiful. great job!!!!!

  • on Haiku (Birds singing...) by Jack Kerouac, on May 18, 2004
    i want to wake up to that wet dawn with the birds singing as i am blindly stumbling about. to be wet from mornings dew and cold from the moonlight, slowly warming in the dawn sun..

    to be that free. this is a beautiful haiku---we need more Jack here!!

  • on Haiku (The low yellow...) by Jack Kerouac, on May 18, 2004
    kerouac, this is a little different than what you often write. and i appreciate that--when a writer can deviate from the expected norm of his style, and still create something truly "his" out of it...

    i think this is a subtle showing of his talent. great job

  • on Haiku (The taste...) by Jack Kerouac, on May 18, 2004
    i love Jack---we need more of him on this website...he is amazing!!!! "why kneel?" ah, me...it is so outsanding and powerful..

    sigh..i love jack.