- Last seen on Feb 13 10:19 AM 2006. Member since February 14, 2006.
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on Life Is Fine by Langston Hughes, on January 25, 2005its good. but, uh... i dont get it. maybe thats just because im dumb.. lol
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on Your Laughter by Pablo Neruda, on December 14, 2004I love this poem. My boyfriend has memerized this poem and said it to me..
My love, in the darkest
hour your laughter
opens, and if suddenly
you see my blood staining
the stones of the street,
laugh, because your laughter
will be for my hands
like fresh
jet black paint
He changed the ending to something that both him and I both love. I love him.
I love the flow and beat of this poem. Its totally romantic and perfect. He sees it from both sides as well. Not only does he love the laughter and sees himself with it, he also sees himself without it, and I think that is great. This is one of my favorite poems and I love all the other work by Pable Naruda.
