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Hellizacomin

  • Last seen on Aug 4 11:05 PM 2007. Member since February 14, 2006.
  • I am a 20 year old girl from Connecticut (United States)
  • When I'm not writing, I'm a mail carrier.
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  • Hello My Shadow at allpoetry
    Hello my shadow You are always so close
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    "No Title"
    Sometimes I feel
  • Look For Me at allpoetry
    Look for me.
    In the crowd of broken dreams.

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  • on The Kiss by Julia Caroline (Ripley) Dorr, on June 3, 2005
    oh wow. this was so beautiful. i loved this poem. awesome format and word choice. so smooth. such a relaxing and sad poem if that makes any sense. i really liked this poem. awesome write.

    peace and love
    <3
    -ashley

  • on What A Baby Costs by Edgar Albert Guest, on December 3, 2004
    I like this poem so much. It's stunning. I dont have kids yet but I am not old enough to have kids. I love this poem so much!!! Peace.

  • on The Blossom by William Blake, on December 3, 2004
    I adore Blake, he is the most versatile poet of his time. He is playful, yet has an inner strength that is mightier than any Wilkinson, man or sword! This is a sweet, hard poem that juxtaposes nature nicely, especially the lines "... swift as arrow/...your cradle narrow,/..." I think the Greeks call this zeugma. Peace

  • on Thou Art Indeed Just, Lord, If I Contend by Gerard Manley Hopkins, on December 3, 2004
    This is utterly depressing; I think I would maybe like it, or relate to it more, if I were a priest or a nun, keyword is maybe. It is just so grim and sterile, especially the last two lines, i.e., "Times eunich,...send my roots rain." Peace