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Jakeofspades

  • Last seen on Feb 8 12:40 PM 2007. Member since February 8, 2007.
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  • My Cycle (low) at allpoetry
    Yea I've been here before; I've sank down and drowned
  • Pieces of me at allpoetry
    Emotion memory, / one of nature's whiplash disasters, / stored in the least suspected sounds, or / welded together in a background smell. / Sensual triggers: violating, / associating and dissapearing, / only
  • Wild Fire at allpoetry
    Walking down this well of feelings / through tinted alleys and clouded lanes / where short bursts of street-lamp clutter / shatter the moonlight's proximity. / A dead rhythm of church / montage answers incapable pra

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  • on The Man He Killed by Thomas Hardy, on February 8, 2007
    I disagree with the negative comments regarding this piece. Just because the style is dated I still enjoy the 'train of thought' style of this poem, I get the sense of the soldier's guilt. The message is obvious? I don't disagree with you, but it's important!