Mbm

• Last seen on Oct 11 4:08 PM 2008. Member since October 8, 2008.
• I am a 41 year old person (United States)
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• on Sonnet LXVI: I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You by Pablo Neruda, on October 10, 2008

  omission around emotion

  selection time for long suffering can't come and so then neither regards for irregularity of whom life is really with through the crevices of our craving. the first stanza has a blink like the springs of a bared trampoline, where some only exercise due to requirement kept around with but endorphins need more of a door momentum with life.
  
  with that hankering, it can happen in the heavy hearted home for seeing it not remain sunk. personally, the second set of verse entails a little of what turn around is needed between husband and miscarriage warped wife... by expectations of companionship though.
  
  should subside by more than mechanical winter routine. left out of festering or freshness, yet limits need the overall. there needs to be a dance to this dance perhaps whispered as well as penned.